blindessence


:Diary Title - --See Right Through Me

:Username - Blindessence

:Link ~ 5/5

:Template ~ 15/20

I think your layout is hot! The darker the better. Usually templates w/ the one eye get to me, but this one seems different. If you ask me I think you should change your text color from white, to maybe a light brown. The white takes away from the picture.


:Navigation ~ 10/10

Everything was easy to find and get to, and they all work.

:Content ~ 30/40

You've really stuck with dland for awhile...congrats! I can totally relate to the entry She Can Feel You Drifting Far Away But She Can't See Through What You Do Not Say Take A Step Back Don't Lose Your Ground Remember How You Felt Before I like your writing style a lot. One thing that got to me though. Your entry titles are WAY TO LONG. It's like you have to write a short poem before you get to the point. I think you should maybe add a scrolling text box to your older entries page, like the one on the index. It would make life easier, and look way better.

:Contact ~ 1/5

The only thing I see is your notes. Am I suppose to search for the rest?

:Errors ~ 5/5

None that I can see

:Extras ~ 10/10

You have a ton of extras! I love the Jennifer is page. You actually googled yourself! I also like all the music links, and the other diaries you read.


:Will I be back? ~ 1/5

Probably not

:Total ~ 77/100

--Reviewed By: Destiny* extra reviewer--

yesterday x & x tomorrow

on 2004-08-05 @ 8:53 p.m.]

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