mmlove.dl
Diary Title - Dreaming in Blue : mmloveUsername - mmlove
Link - 4/5
Yeah. But its not a button
First Impression -
It looks like its going to be all day logging, no emotion. Can NO ONE get a nice balance between the two?
Template - 10/20
It's better than the old one. Nicer colour scheme. But still, what IS IT with you and SWIRLS. The writing is in a long thin column too, and it doesn't fit in the box! ARGH!!! Not to mention that I can't get your links to work, so its obviously got browser issues or something, because or not its working for you, its not working for someone trying to use your diary.
Also, I don't get the quote 'Dreaming in blue'. Dreaming black and white, yeah. But dreaming in blue. So all you can see is blue then?
Navigation - 5/10
They work, but my mouse wont click on them so I have to do it using the keyboard. Not good
Content - 35/40
You said that all reviewers would say is that you are boring. I actually had no intention of saying that at all, just to prove you wrong.
Your diary was really nice to read. It was actually exactly what I expected it not to be - a mix between daylogging, and emotion.
You explain things carefully, so it feels like I actually know you, even though I don't.
A pleasure to review :)
Contact - 5/5
You really do want people to stalk you, dont you?
Errors - 4/5
The links
Grammar/Spelling - 5/5
Indeed you can. I can't see a mistake.
Extras - 2/5
Not really.
Will I be back? - 4/5
Probably
Total - 74/100
So near, and yet so far.
The only thing I had a real problem with was the template. It's dull, and it doesn't suit the way you write.
--Reviewed By: Beth